• Member Since 19th Apr, 2019
  • offline last seen Dec 23rd, 2022

Mr_N


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It's a calm winter night at the changeling hive, and Everyone is excited for Hearth's Warming! However, while his subjects finish with the preparations, Thorax is busy trying to find the royal cuddlier so he can cuddle his stress away!


NOTE: As of Sep, 23 2021, this story is no longer canon to the "Cercus the changeling" series. To read the first canon story in the series click here.

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Comments ( 5 )

Yeah, its rough. That said, this is the kind of story that a writer can rewrite in a year or two into something truely great.

Feels somewhat rushed.

It feels a little rushed but overall good. I do enjoy the concept and I think you can make it better, but for now it's short and sweet and I like it.

Seems a bit rushed and to the point but I didn't really see anything wrong with it. Pretty good for your first story, I liked it enough. Here's a like and a fav. I wish you luck on your future stories.

It was good but too short.

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