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Worn from dethroning Chrysalis with his friends, Thorax decides the first thing he will do as king, is sleep. At some point during the night, he is woken by a nightmare and finds Cercus, the royal cuddlier.


Just to clarify, I only put the sex tag 'cus i wasn't sure whether or not a joke in the story warranted it or not.

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I feel cheated! I demand snugs in the sequel of the sequel! :pinkiesmile:

Cute little story. I do find it peculiar how Chrysalis would be the one to invent that position. :trixieshiftright: If you decide to continue this fanonverse any further you'll definitely want to address and explain that more. :twilightsmile:

This definitely needs a sequel! or more chapters!

You've set the scene for them, now let us see how it's gonna play out! If Thorax eventually accepts his royal cuddlier's offer, will that lead them towards weaving a — perhaps furtive — relationship? Who will make the move first — will it be Thorax or Cercus... what about both at the same time? If Thorax refuses, will he still cuddle up with Cercus?

I really wish you expanded this story further! Whatever path you choose for it, I support you!

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Don't worry, I definitely plan on making a sequel sometime down the road. :) But will our heros ever get together? I suppose only time will tell. >:)

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Oh hey, never would have expected to see you in my comments lol. Anyway, yeah, if I ever do i sequel I will definitely go into more detail about how/why Chrysalis of all ponies would create the "Royal cuddlier" position. :)

Slowly, Thorax made his way to the crevice he called a bed, but found that he was now too big to fit into it properly.

Thorax thought about it for a moment,

Cercus then began to lay down,

he soon found himself way too tired to even worry.

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Thank you for pointing these out to me.

I never know which "to" to use it seems. I'll fix it up tomorrow when my laptop (hopefully) decides to start working again, as I hate having to write/edit on my phone.

Also I'm not sure if you're interested in this series, but if you are, I would like to mention that I'm still working on the next fic and (as of writing this) I plan on writing three chapters for it! :)

Thanks again for pointing out my errors, and have a nice day.

Edit: Managed to get my laptop working, I'll fix it now.

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