• Member Since 10th Feb, 2018
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What do you do when you feel like something is missing, you speak to your friends, of course.

Just thought I'd have a go at writing a one-shot story, I've had this idea floating around in my head for awhile, but I wanted to finish my other story before I started this. Please feel free to leave a comment and I hope you like it :twilightsmile:

As always thanks for the help HAKDurbin :twilightsmile: If you haven't already go check out his stories :twilightsmile:

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Very awesome story, wholeseome, sad, and a plot that kept me interested the entire time.

Thanks so much, glad ya liked it:pinkiehappy: i don't have many stories but i'm always greatful for comments :twilightsmile:

A sweet yet heart wrenching story, with my fave purple dragon playing quite the key role! :pinkiegasp::fluttercry:

Thanks for sharing! :twilightsmile::moustache:

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Thanks, I'm glad ya liked it. Spikes my fav as well :pinkiehappy: In fact the only other 2 stories I have are Spike stories :rainbowlaugh:

I had a similar idea for a story like this awhile back, where Spike chose to use a magic portal gifted to him by Ember, to bring the Apples back for a day even when he could've used it to meet his parents for a day instead. But I like your characterizations and dialogue better. The banter is very good, and you did excellent work in capturing everyone's emotional state. And you found a way to include pretty much everyone, which was very nice as well.

Thank you for writing this. It's good to see someone could actually put this concept to (digital) paper.

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Well, you know what they say. Great minds think a like, right :pinkiehappy: I'm so glad you liked it and enjoyed reading it. I'm not the greatest of writers :rainbowlaugh: But it always put a smile on my face knowing people like what I wrote, so thanks :twilightsmile:

I actually came up with this idea when I was writing my first story, it's just taken some time as I wanted to finish that before I started this. I'm a BIG spike fan :pinkiehappy: and I love to see him shine. I do have one or two ideas floating around in my head for another story atm, well i say ideas its more like a scene in my head at the moment, but I may have a go at writing it at some point.

Sorry for going on :rainbowlaugh: But thank you for leaving a comment, always nice to read, and for taking the time to read my story, :twilightsmile:

This was great can’t wait to see more.

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Thanks Saber Cutlass :twilightsmile: I'm glad you liked it, tho you may have to wait abit for another story as I'm still thinking of plots and ideas for my next one(If i ever get around to writing it:rainbowlaugh:)

As always thanks for taking the time to read my stories and for leaving comments(along with the reviews u send me, man I love reading thoes, thanks) Its always nice to know people liked my stories, so thank you :twilightsmile:

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And that’s all good, take your time you can’t rush good things.

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