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lunar eclipsa


I Am a new fanfic writer!

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Starlit Sun is a filly who just started school in ponyville, but when all goes to chaos she has to pick between her father, her mother or her friends.


First story by Lunar Eclipsa!

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 1 )

This is a cute story, but the pacing is extremely fast and you really need an editor. I'd recommend trying this group:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
If you get an editor, let me know, I'd love to check out this story when it's had some touching up done. :twilightsmile:

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