• Published 2nd Apr 2020
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The Vox v.s. The Ponies - LunaAlpha



The Vox capture Princess Luna and hold her for ransom.

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The Plan

They rode the train to Canterlot and found Princess Celestia in the throne room.

"We came as fast as we could!" Twilight said.

"Thank you." Celestia replied.

" We can't just pay 3000 bits! They might be lying!" Rainbow Dash yelled.

" We need a plan." said Applejack.

"I think I have it. The letter said outside the Everfree forest so we can put a decoy there. We would be hiding in bushes and when they come out to collect it, we blast them with the Elements." said Twilight.

" But what about Princess Luna?" asked Rarity.

"We will blast the leader or one of them and get the other one to tell us where she is and bring us to her."said Twilight.

"Sounds like a plan to me." said Rainbow Dash and the other agreed too.

Author's Note:

Comments appreciated :twilightsmile:

Comments ( 10 )

Rainbow Dash is two words, fyi.
Seems like this will be a cool adventure story! :)

The Vox are ponies that can change into anything or form

So... What's their relationship with the changelings like?

10161401
I do enjoy it when they apply what they learned.

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The Vox are ponies that can change into anything or form

So... What's their relationship with the changelings like?

10200963
ok thanks
umm..... lets just say that their great-great-great-great-great-great-grandmothers were sisters

10255657
You can go to this group:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
and then just create a thread asking for editors. Here's a place to look if you still need help figuring it out: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors/thread/127527/how-to-request-an-editor

10255691
on some of the threads it has a link to go to the story. how do you do that?

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