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Soooo....basically just public school. Seriously, I had an English teacher once whose only requirement for passing was not slamming the door. Public schools kinda suck.
Either that or she's an anime protagonist. One of the two.
So here's a thought, does the portal still exist? I can only imagine Equestria Twilight trying to magic of friendship in this setting lol.
"Well, I tried. I'll leave nice flowers at your funeral."
And tripped and fell on her ass because she hadn't moved from her position sitting down and laying back.
Well, I mean, that kind of is a pretty damn good lead. Just saying.
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My eyes shined with absolute glory and nostalgia as I read your name and your style of commentary! I am so glad to have you back reading once again (or, more accurately, very glad that you're here again, despite my extremely long hiatus from writing)!
Man, I used to get so triggered when you would comment on these stories, because the old me didn't know how to handle feedback at all!
The continuity error with Rainbow Dash still being seated has been fixed! Thank you very much for your feedback, it is much appreciated, and once again, I am super glad to see that you've returned!
Edit: And yes, I completely agree with the public school thing. My middle school was stupidly easy, and even my High School that was renowned for being one of the best, took only a small level of motivation to be a 3.5+ student. A tragedy, but hey, at least it was easy.
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Well I'm glad you're back. Snark aside I did enjoy the previous story, I'm sure I'll enjoy this one as well.
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Smoking a blunt on my break rn, and idk why, but this ambiguous use of ābussinā twice in a row really has me so dead š
Thanks for the read (:
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Damn, your replies are entertaining š
But responding to this one before the last major one to clarify 2 things so far:
There is no special reason that particular word appears in this universe. Or, rather, the history of a world overrun by underworld syndicates doesnāt really favor social studies for such a thing to be common knowledge. Thatās as much as Iāll say without spoiling anything, but itās existence will be touched on in the sequel when the group spreads out from their small city on the edge of the map.
Second, as a recreational drug enthusiast, I must emphasize that amphetamine is not meth. Iām not saying itās better, or much less dangerous, but it does have distinct differences. All amphetamines do, which is why Iām careful in describing the particular drug use that will occur in this story, itās got a bit of thought put into it ā as much thought as can be put in to a hobby-pastime like this, anyway.
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Much appreciation for the constructive feedback, Iāve read it and seriously considered it.
The flaws youāve presented to me shows me the importance of perhaps revising and revisiting before I hit publish, and maybe taking the developmental process with more consideration.
Thank you, this advice will not only help this series improve as I work on it, but will help all of my future writing projects.
āPreciate you šŖš¾
You haven't finished your heros not fit for love fiction. Will there be an ending chapter with a rescue or anything at all?. Its been 4 yrs waiting for an update. I really liked that fic a lot and its the all time favorite of mine.
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I am so glad that you enjoyed that story thoroughly, but itās so badly written that itās kind of hard for me to figure out how to conclude it properly, which is the main reason I do not come back to it.
Itās very cliche, and although I like the plot, at this point, I feel it would have to be tackled differently. But now that I am an adult, and have less time for my hobbies, itās hard for me to sit down and truly plan a rewrite, or update of the story.
If I do continue it, I will be teasing that in my blogs, but otherwise, I donāt have much desire to do so, as disappointing as that may be :(
Iām sorry!
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That's just sad. To me it was well written enough. At the last chapter it came us a surprise to me that rarity would give herself up to the mean big dragon. So I was kinda looking forward to how she would reconcile with spike and move on. I just wanted the dialogues to play out in my mind but I couldn't imagine anything that's why I was looking forward to the last chapter. After all its just one chapter. I thought it wouldn't be so taxing for u if u already had ideas and typing doesn't take too much time. But it seems ur well of ideas also ran dry. Just know that to me it was your number one story even though its a bit old to you. I'm a hardcore spike fan and I love it to bits. The emotional roller coaster spike went through gave me mind organs that can't be explained through words.
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I mean, considering I still enjoy writing fan fictions, the possibility isnāt 0. I just like to be transparent in telling people it is highly unlikely.
Iāll give it a reread and see if any inspiration comes, though.
But once again, it means a lot that you enjoyed the story as much as you did (: