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Smoking a blunt on my break rn, and idk why, but this ambiguous use of “bussin” twice in a row really has me so dead 😂

Thanks for the read (:

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Much appreciation for the constructive feedback, I’ve read it and seriously considered it.

The flaws you’ve presented to me shows me the importance of perhaps revising and revisiting before I hit publish, and maybe taking the developmental process with more consideration.

Thank you, this advice will not only help this series improve as I work on it, but will help all of my future writing projects.

‘Preciate you 💪🏾

You haven't finished your heros not fit for love fiction. Will there be an ending chapter with a rescue or anything at all?. Its been 4 yrs waiting for an update. I really liked that fic a lot and its the all time favorite of mine.

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I am so glad that you enjoyed that story thoroughly, but it’s so badly written that it’s kind of hard for me to figure out how to conclude it properly, which is the main reason I do not come back to it.

It’s very cliche, and although I like the plot, at this point, I feel it would have to be tackled differently. But now that I am an adult, and have less time for my hobbies, it’s hard for me to sit down and truly plan a rewrite, or update of the story.

If I do continue it, I will be teasing that in my blogs, but otherwise, I don’t have much desire to do so, as disappointing as that may be :(

I’m sorry!

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That's just sad. To me it was well written enough. At the last chapter it came us a surprise to me that rarity would give herself up to the mean big dragon. So I was kinda looking forward to how she would reconcile with spike and move on. I just wanted the dialogues to play out in my mind but I couldn't imagine anything that's why I was looking forward to the last chapter. After all its just one chapter. I thought it wouldn't be so taxing for u if u already had ideas and typing doesn't take too much time. But it seems ur well of ideas also ran dry. Just know that to me it was your number one story even though its a bit old to you. I'm a hardcore spike fan and I love it to bits. The emotional roller coaster spike went through gave me mind organs that can't be explained through words.

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I mean, considering I still enjoy writing fan fictions, the possibility isn’t 0. I just like to be transparent in telling people it is highly unlikely.

I’ll give it a reread and see if any inspiration comes, though.

But once again, it means a lot that you enjoyed the story as much as you did (: