A perfectionist’s plan goes awry.
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does this qualify to change the whole story to M?
Edit: i got to talking to others, this chapter constitute the story's upgrade rating to M
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How many others did you talk to, and how?
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Fimfiction's official discord.. so yeah you might want to upgrade it, no 'voting' and just edit it and i was told you could use the other red tags
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Thanks for the input. I went ahead and made those changes.
Welp, that was quite the dream. I wonder how much of it was real. Nice to see Diamond already having a place to stay.
Considering her experiences with ponies so far, I think Cozy has every reason to feel this way about them.
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That, and she had that outlook in life in general. This "Dark Entity" is certainly reinforcing that point about ponies. Among the few she actually trusts is Sunset, who was a former pony. In Cozy's mind, however, she could look at Sunset is a weird exception.
There is no way Sci-Twi in my story would abandon a child in need. On the contrary, she would go out of her way to help such a person, especially after learning how much distress Diamond is in, and why.
You misspelled slumber party in the title for chapter 29. Just thought I should bring that to your attention. Keep up the good work! 👍🏻
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"Slumber Part" Instead of "Slumber PartY" Thanks for the heads up, and thank you for the thumbs up. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
is this author's "get it out of my system" chapter?
This made me lol.
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This chapter is really intense and the only reason the story has an M rating. I felt I gave a fair warning by putting the author's note in the beginning here just in case it might trigger some people. I'm fairly certain some people have skipped it because of that warning, but it's also telling that it's simultaneously one of the most read chapters of this book. So this is divisive. A love it or hate it sort of situation.
With this example you pointed out, there's really an odd mix here. On the one hand, you may be able to see why the entity has some resistance to being fully attracted to a creature which, to him, has alien physiology. That wouldn't give everyone pause. Some people do have fantasies of having sex with various different things other than their own species, but he doesn't which I think is understandable and fair for the most part. To me, that's in character for him.
But as for Cozy, the primary reason she's out of character here is A) This is a dream. Things can get wacky and all over the place with a dream anyway, and B) this is a manipulated dream by not just one, but two other entities other than Cozy. The important aspect to take away for her in this chapter is a reveal of one of her deepest fears and vulnerability in a setting that would most realistically reveal it at this juncture of the story.