A perfectionist’s plan goes awry.
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Great work keep it up
That means Pony Cozy suffered the same fate. Poor child
Great chapter!
Looks like Cozy still has her skills at reading others,
Did she just say knock instead of knocking?
OH GOD ITS HER! YES!
She kinda did and it didn't work out but I think she should try it again.
I now want to see that so badly.
That must have been such an awkward adoption. The press must have been swarming them non-stop.
Based on this I can't help but wonder that P. Cozy's parents might have been unicorns and gave her a grudge on magic itself.
Ah, there she is. I think P. Cozy's going to be a bit more difficult then H. Cozy due to her already being a full time villain before getting adopted. Would be Ironic if H. Cozy were to help her reform by becoming her penpall.
Aww, P. Cozy is already learning to care for others! Twilight and her friends are doing a great job with her so far.
Actually I wonder if she was concious in it in your story. Based on her mannerisms I'd say no.
Damn, Cozy pulled a reverse Sunset on herself.
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lol. Oh, that cracked me up. Good one.
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Thank you.
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Yeah. Life is rough sometimes. As far as i know, pony Cozy does not have a backstory to help explain why she is the way she is. By portraying her the way I do in this chapter, it gives a realistic reason for it. It's not this wake up one morning and spontaneously decide "I think I'm going to be a villain today." No. Most people who take that path were victims themselves at one time.
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Thanks!
Well, yeah. She is a genius.
Yeah. I don't know if you remember this, but Cozy herself said the same thing in the story when she returned to the room with the portal mirror in Equestria. I don't think Twilight is deliberately mocking Cozy for that, but there is that potential connection.
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Yeah . . . I figured it would be in character for her to try.
I can't say that Twilight wouldn't care about the backlash such a decision would create, but overall I think she'd be concerned with doing what she feels is right. She might have even made a grand announcement, perhaps even a song about the importance of tolerance and forgiveness. Maybe also talk about how she felt guilty about this all these years.
I'm not perfectly clear on a true canon reason why Pony Cozy attacked magic in Equestria, but it seems as if she was jealous. She wanted to have more power, and it may have seemed that another breed of ponies had more of it. Also, there seemed to be a racist strain in her when she spoke of the other races. It's actually why I considered her and Neighsay to be on the same team at one time. That is why it surprised me when it turned out they opposed each other. That is why, in my story, I portrayed both of them with similar tension towards each other.
Well, yeah. This is the show canon Cozy so I'm basing this character from what I know of her in the show. She's been frozen in stone for years harboring a deep-seated grudge, but otherwise most of her personality has been on pause. That is why I'm portraying her in this story the way the show did before she got turned to stone. Pony Cozy would likely continue to do everything in her power to scheme her way into greater power.
lol. Well, I think it's well established the P Cozy is quite the problem child.
I can see why you'd say that, but this one I'm leaving up to readers interpretation. Seems I got yours.
This statement kind of confused me. What is the reverse of Sunset?
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Sunset has the power to read others memories. H. Cozy projected her own memories to P. Cozy. Its like the reverse of what Sunset does.
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Ah I see. I was wondering did you mean reverse of Sunset's persoality or . . . I didn't know, but you helped to explain. Thank you. It may interest you to know that next chapter is posted. Enjoy. i posted it just before this comment.