A perfectionist’s plan goes awry.
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10187490
Considering all the talk of her parents leaving her and her not being worthy of their love I think I can see some corralation between her and Diamond if human Spoiled is like her pony counterpart.
10187594
Ah, now that's the key that ultimately helps to unravel Cozy's plan, at least when it comes to her agendas against Diamond. What if her nemesis turns out to be too relatable?
From my perspective as a writer, I tried to show many correlations between Cozy and Diamond, as if to specify that they are also counterparts to each other. This story is somewhat twisted in the sense that you get to see life through the eyes of the villain of the story, but if Cozy is the "antagonist", then who is the true "protagonist"? In any good story, it often highlights the important similarities and differences between the hero and villain.
They went through very similar tragedies that led them down better paths, or at least potentially better paths. Opportunites open for them both. They just have to claim it.
So, to use that "drama" tag, there is a push and pull between their relationship. Obstacles and unexpected challenges for them both to overcome.
The fact that you've followed the story this far shows it is somewhat engaging. I welcome your input because that feedback helps to guide me to become a better writer.
10187754
Well, you certainly succeeded in giving out the feels. I do wonder how Cozy will end up getting caught after all this.
10187837
I can't respond to that comment without giving too many spoilers, so I'll just say read on and see what happens. I'll also add that I finished the story on my computer and google docs, so there definitely is and ending. You won't be left hanging.
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The last two chapters legitimately hurt my soul to read. But I need to grow inured to it, for my aspirations align with those of Scootaloo.
10416009
would you call your theory confirmed by this chapter?