A young pegasus filly, Whitespot, is a unique character that everybody can relate to. She is a skillful acrobat trainer with a lucky pair of wings without which wouldn't be able to achieve success. Whitespot is trying to prove to herself that she can do anything. Although she is a happy young filly, sometimes she feels doubtful or shy about herself. She wants to improve herself better than she can imagine.
One day, a terrible storm clashes over Ponyville. After the storm is over, Whitespot loses hope (which you'll find out). Whitespot loses her faith until Scootaloo comes to save her, feeling so sorry for Whitespot. Scootaloo helps training Whitespot. Not only does Scootaloo teaches her, but Scootaloo also shows her the value of determination and pride. Both Whitespot and Scootaloo have a lot in common.
Will Whitespot ever succeed in the Acrobat Competition?
This story is all about determination, hope, courage, and love.
I'm sorry, but....just by reading that description I'm turned off. It's a garbled mess. The premise sounds interesting, but if the description is any indication, I don't think I'll be able to read the story. I'd recommend getting an editor.
If Whitespot was voiced, what would she sound like?
I have to agree with the other guy, even if your ideas may be good, you don't have the greatest grasp of the English language. You should get an editor, or at least someone who can give you advice on how to write more... coherent sentences.