• Member Since 31st Mar, 2017
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HeartfireFirebrand


A leaner of SFM who writes ocassionally

Comments ( 22 )

You might wanna reread your story. There's quite alot of typos here.

9999942
I'm having a hard time finding them, could you point some of them out. It would really help.

The party didn’t go on too long before the town had to get back to business, Fluttershy smiled “Luster, do you mind coming with Luster and Songbird to my cottage? They can get a view of town if they come through town on the way.”

Luster is coming with Luster? Hmm.

10011500
Fixed, thanks for that.:pinkiehappy: I must admit that made me laugh, that was such an obvious mistake.

Yeesh, this is progressing fast!

10011524
That is a bit of a problem I have sometimes.

10011529
It's fine, of you want to write your way, then write your way.
😁

I kinda thought my token would be found here, you can guess why. *Cough*title*cough*

10017105
I have the page open to chapter that is right now so I don't forget.

Songbird gets sent to the other side of the multiverse. Blame the Genie and his terrible aim.

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