When a lost prince returns home, he has trouble accepting his past, as it could effect his present, and his future and everything he's ever known. And all this while stuck in a love triangle between two mares.
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Hmm...… I'm intrigued, do continue. Please.
Also, please tell me: is Twilight her mother?
Ookay….. This got dark really quickly..... And I really like it! Is that wrong?
Also, Fury, what's with you, dude? Take a chill pill, bub, geez
OKAY WHOA! SLOW DOWN!
*takes deep breath*
I don't mind a romance..... but a kiss... now? YOU HAVRE TRIGGERED ME!
Twilight is my baby girl, and if he hurts her..... bad things will happen....
Starlight! Bad! That was very bad!
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XD
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😂😂😂
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It's not wrong that you like it. XD
No, Twilight is not the filly's mother. XD
I take it said prince is Blueblood?
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No
Hmm..... Things just keep getting more deep. However, if I may: I couldn't quite enjoy it as much as I wanted to. I know that you want to give away some things better left in the future, but you got to have some information to work with. I know that the lack of information probably indicates huge time skips, and if that's the case, you need to clarify that. Also, you need to have more vital information to allow the story to have structure and back-bone.
I apologize if this seemed to picky, but that's just advise for future chapters. Other than that, this is quite good. Next chapter please.
I will take that into consideration.
Great chapter I hope it won't be long now until Starlight becomes an Alicorn hope you will be able to update again soon.
Thanks, and It won't be long. And I hope to get the next chapter up this weekend. So, stay on the lookout for that.
Why isn't this rated M?
There are stories probably a lot worse than this and rated T. But I labeled it as T because it is meant for that specific audience. And I guess people over 18 could read it to if they want. But it mainly is for teen audience and it's not enough to be considered More rating. I don't really think this could even compare to some T rated stories that have the same tags.
It's getting very intressting now. keep up the great work can't wait for the next chapter I hope you be able to squzee another chapter in again this weekend.
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Well, it looks like I did. Lol.
Another great chapter keep up the great work I hope Starlight will become an Alicorn in the next chaper and help to defeat Sombra. i just can't wait for the next chapter I'm hooked I need to know what's going to happen next.
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I'm glad you like it! I put a lot of time and effort into this story. And it went through a lot of rewrites if you read my note on the prologue then you would see that, but yeah. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Thanks again for adding another great chapter keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter.
Glad you like it. I hope to have the next chapter written, edited and out soon. But I'm not sure when.
Thanks again for another great chapter I hope there are still a few more chaoters to come. If not thank you for sharing you story it has been a wonderful read and I hope that there will be a sequal in the future.
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There still are three more chapters. And I have been thinking about a sequel recently, so it is a possibility.
The bat syndicate is a bunch of lunatics, they killed a young filly for something that wasn’t her fault and did so brutally. The filly was in control and had enough sense to surrender, yet the Royal sisters sat there and did nothing. It’s disgusting that they allowed it to happen.
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They are a bunch of merciless beings. You should read chapter 22. What they do there is even more heartless.
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It doesn’t surprise me one bit, though by extension the Royal Sisters are not clean either!
They could stop them at anytime, but they choose to stand by and watch, it’s disgusting.
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Yep. But don't worry, they will be doing something in chapter 23.
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Though honestly nothing short of the total atomization of the Bat Syndicate will wash the blood of the Royal Sisters hoofs.
Good chapter keep up the good work
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Thanks! 😁😁😁
The next chapter is the last one, right?
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Yes
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wait wait wait! I think you missed something! Celestia is immortal AND the embodiment of the sun! That fire would have been a warm bath to her!
I still call shenanigans on Celestias death, but a good story none-the-less!
So what’s next?
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Not even Alicorns can survive everything. Not even Celestia. Especially with the killing spell he casted.
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And maybe an audio drama of the story. Not sure when I can do that, but I hope it can be soon. But after this I'm going to be taking a break from writing for a little while.
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True, but Again she is the manifestation of her sun! Her and Luna are directly connected to their charges, they are immortal for as long as their Charges exist.
From what I understand ALL of the Alicorns (can’t speak for the bat types) are Immortal so long as their respective charges they govern over exist, this is even eluded to in canon. So even IF Celestia does, she would come back from her charge akin like a phoenix from its ashes.
Meh, it just seemed like a copout for Dramas sake.
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That would be cool, I hope the break isn’t permanent! A lot of authors say that and don’t come back
As for what you write when you come back? I will not lie, I wouldn’t mind seeing a Dusk Shine story XD
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The break won't be permanent. I promise that. Cause most likely I'll be back with a sequel to Midnight Sun. And a Dusk Shine story? I have never done a story with the gender swapped mane six before. I may take it into consideration. And I have wanted to make an audio drama for awhile, ever since I watched Ashley H's Remembrance, so I really want to do one and I want it to be of this story.
Thnaks for the wondeful story I hope in there wil be a sequal to go with this story keep up the good work
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!! 😁
This story is just..... I don't know....
Can someone please tell me why I'm reading this again?
Rainius, Rainius, Rainius…… If you turely love Starlight, why are you holding back the truth?
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I'm guessing you're are not liking it anymore?
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My apologies, that was rather unkind, now that I'm looking back on it. I was reading the story again for the second time to catch up, and was finally beginning to understand the plots points and how everything fit together.
Please don't get me wrong: I freaking LOVE the story itself.
Its the way it was written that was confusing and irritating me; mostly grammer mistakes (I have a sort of trigger problems with confusing stories, like huge time skips, vague details for the characters, polt points that I never saw coming, grammer errors, etc.) That, does not excuse what I said. A poor choice of words. 
Now I'm truly thinking about it, your story is epic and intriguing and includes all the wonderful things a story should have to keep your readers interested--- hence all the positive comments (Which by the way, congrats! Good on you, my friend)
I'm getting off track here. My point is, I love the story, I truly do. I was getting off track and extremely confused because of the constant grammer snags I kept running into, and I complained to the internet, which rightfully caused you to respond.
So, (as a very long and detailed answer to your question) to answer your question: I love the story, and I was confused about the way it was written, and I lashed out, and I am very sorry.
(If you got bored reading this, I'm sorry for that too
)
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It's fine and thank you! And I hope you are ready for maybe an audio drama of it if I do that and a sequel in the future.
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Yes! Yes please! If you'll allow me, I would love to provide some art for background peices!
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Okay. I would love you to see what you do with this!
Uhh that was confusing or I'm just dumb :')