• Published 15th Jan 2020
  • 227 Views, 19 Comments

In the Rainbow Factory... - Kaveh



The darkest secret. Being kept by one of the Mane six. And she will soon kill them all. Under any circumstances. Even to just create rainbows. And to get rid of any trace of this betrayal. Celestia, Harmony isn't always what it seems.

Comments ( 10 )

I just finished binging this fic. And I uncovered it after reading it's now removed sequel: Goodbye Traitor. Uh, was that non-canon? Because it doesn't seem to fit with this one at all. Or am I missing a piece that goes in-between?

10060918
That's the second sequel. I'm still working on the first sequel.

10061905
...Ah. Kinda threw me for a loop.
So how are the Mane 6 going to come back to life?

I knew dash was going to regret it in this alternate ending!!! This was an incredible fic and i’m Thinking of doing this fic for a future Month Of Macabre 2020 reading. This had me freaking out through most of the story even though i’m Reading this past 2:00 in the morning. I loved it and good luck with chapter six of amnesia!!!!!

10088999
I have a terrible, crappy reading of it on my channel (I'm typing this from school and I can only access videos on YouTube approved by the school). yol. And thanks! Also, a Month of MAcabre reading would be a great idea. And I'll check out your YouTube channel when I get back. Sorry I didn't check it out sooner.

10061918
No spoilers :pinkiehappy:

10092983
That’s awesome, I hope you enjoy my content

Changed the cover to something better, but the art is still old, so this isn't exactly the style I draw with now, but eh. I don't have time to make another new cover :/
(Why do I still update a crappy story lmao)

10404830
it looks awesome!

also, have you checked out my channel yet? if yes. what do you think?

plus, i just watched your most recient video, and i want to give you a speedpaint suggestion, can you do my OC working in the rainbow factory with rainbow dash in the background, i'll send you a picture on our private messaging board, and if you don't pick this suggestion, i won't be happy but i'll accept it.

10408060
Thank you, yes I have, congratulations on getting a new sub, it's spelled recent (sorry lol), I might take the suggestion, it kinda depends, and if you don't mind I might add my OC to the picture (not the one in my pfp)

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