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Kaveh


Carrd ┆ Rewriting The Death Mansion of No Escape from scratch.

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you proposed no escape, I can't wait to see who defies death. Of course I can't read this now as it'd just be a cliffhanger. Going to track this and await completion.

"Do you think we're going toloose anypony tonight?" Rainbow Dash asked, looking for the seeing tool.

lose

"You're right. But we can't loose anyone else."

lose

"I DON'T CARE!!! I'M NOT LOOSING ANYONE ELSE!!!" Twilight screamed. Pinkie Pie and Rarity huddled together.

LOSING

"WE ALL DON'T WANT TO LOOSE ANYONE ELSE!!!" Rainbow Dash yelled back.

LOSE

"I'd rather risk my life than loose anyone else's lives!" Rainbow Dash whisper-exclaimed.

lose

OwO
Your story is epic and I can't wait until the next chapter ^^

Comment posted by Kaveh deleted Jul 18th, 2021

Why isn't there a mystery tag?

Comment posted by Alinami deleted Feb 23rd, 2021

Ey kinda somewhat editing the chapters up so far before continuing Chapter Eight so
Sorry for the incomplete sentence I'm only finishing half of my thoughts
It's 3 AM I had a lot happen today so

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