• Member Since 31st Jan, 2019
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Prince Ashland Lightfoot


Just a writer with little motivation and writes every once in a while. :'3

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Empress Blue Lightning is training with her musical apprentice, Flamedrifter Hill when suddenly a boom is heard, shaking the whole kingdom. The Mane 7 run to find out what it was. It's a meteor that has given them superpowers! But it also has the power to travel to different worlds, trapping Blue Lightning and Flamedrifter in a Parallel Universe of their own with a villain on the loose back home. Can Blue and Flame get back home before its too late?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )
Comment posted by Jackster deleted Dec 20th, 2019

FINALLY! A unique and unpredictable story! I really like how you created the characters from scratch, It really reflects both skill and creativity. I sure am looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice start for your first story. I know how much time it takes as I am too trying to write mine ^^
The adventures start pretty fast. I liked the fact you write using the first person (i.e. "I") when the main character is talking. It may be just me, but I think it involves even more the reader into the core of your story.

I am not an English-native speaker so don't mind my mistakes if there is any.
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