• Member Since 31st Dec, 2011
  • offline last seen Sep 11th, 2014

Unarmed Pony


I write stories... Pretty much it, really.

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Carrot Top lives in Ponyville. She has a garden and sells carrots to the ponies. So why is she hated?
She's Mother Nature. She gives the world love and she watches it grow. Why does nopony like her?
Read through Carrot Top's journey from somepony to somepony everypony wants to see burn.

This is intended to be a short, one chapter story with less than 2000 words.
Don't complain about it being too short.
I may however, do an after death diary series.
Let me know if that's a good idea.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 28 )

Well written and sad, but uh, it made no sense to me :derpytongue2:

~Have a good one.

Dafuq just happened :pinkiegasp:
Why Do I feel like I was trolled? :twilightangry2:

beyond her tomb anyone?

who the hell would writhe that carrot top is a witch

1092888
My thought exactly.

1092888
Well done! You found the secret inspiration!

1092884
Well, this wasn't supposed to be a troll. It's just that when I was writing the death scene it reminded me of ancient English traditions of burning the witch. Then I realized I hadn't yet specified what the newspaper story was.

1092941
Simple. Gabby Gums. That, and I saw a picture of Carrot Top dressed as a witch and I thought she looked awesome!

1093242also noticed the passion of the christ refrence

1093224 BOOYA! I don't how I just got that feeling from the description :yay:

1094152
Well, I'm not a big Christ fan. (Atheist) But I used a cross because a stake sticking out wouldn't work because a ponies legs don't really tend to bend that far back.

1096472
Lyrics from song: "She's Mother Nature! They hate ya!" and "The world is now your garden give them love to grow!"
Words from description: "She's Mother Nature. She gives the world love and watches it grow."
:twilightsmile:

1096574 now have her emerge in regala and tall as celestia
but no horns or wings
or something

1105408
Firstly, a plural on the horn? Where would the second one even go?
Secondly, Only the Princesses can be that tall.

1105609 :ajbemused: you know what i mean
changed ,taller,more elegant ,godly
like in the cover art

1105673
Oh right. No she's dead. Sorry. However, I do like your thinking.
And the cover art is mainly just to grab people's attention.

1109260
Don't be sad! It makes me sad.
Maybe another time. Or an alternate ending is in order!

1125561
The third one didn't work but to the first two, yes.

1128106

:pinkiehappy: When I was watching/ listening to them, I had to check the descriptions to make sure that they weren't based off of this story. I mean, they fit it so well!

1129995
The songs were made first actually. So you could say that the story was based on the song.

So basically, she goes to work one day and discovers that almost everyone wants to kill her, so she accepts the punishment of death? Woah.

4331315 I know. Escalated quickly...

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