• Member Since 10th Oct, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 22nd, 2020

TheCloudtop


I am a BIG Rarity fan. I am also one of the biggest Gamers you will ever meet. My favorite MLP FIM episode is a tie between A Friend In Deed and A Dog and Pony Show.

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Friends. That is one thing that many of us take for granted. This is the story of a pony that had but one real friend, and what she would do for that friend over the course of her life. Join me, as I tell you the tale of the pony that would be forever marked down in Equestrian history as The Blood Red Killer.

Rated teen for now, but will be changed to mature as the story goes on.

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Comments ( 7 )

“The small filly shook her head. Nah, as long as I stay out of trouble, they really don’t care what I do."

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This should prove interesting. I shall keep track of this story.

cloud....wow!!! I love this.
You have improved a lot ! :yay:
Keep going!...if it's ok with you, of course :raritywink:
/hoofbump

Looks good so far, keep it up! :pinkiesmile:

3786806 Thanks!

What do you think of yourself in this story?:rainbowwild:

3786819 Not sure yet, I'll have to wait for more until I can make a proper opinion :derpytongue2:

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