Many would say that to be in love is the sweetest thing that can be felt and it should be celebrated always. All love is beautiful. All love is love. Many others would draw lines in the sand of society, marking the territory of their taboos. Can a heart filled with shame know love? Can a love ever be wrong? Is there a being- any being- too lowly to deserve to love or too high above to be loved? At a peaceful glade outside Ponyville, one changeling infiltrator wrestles with these lines.
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Just a quick reminder on a recurring mistake in the story: “it’s” is the contraction of either “it is” or “it has”. To mark possession it is not “it’s” but “its”.
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Thank you for this observation. It seemed rather strange to me as normally this sort of thing really bugs me, too. (Word Crimes- Weird Al <3) Looking back over the story I noticed a few other grammatical oddities which I just knew I hadn't done. I tested a theory and it seems that yes, indeed, my auto-check program not only inserted an apostrophe in each instance of "its" but for some reason also removed the 2-space indentation from each new paragraph.
Thank you again for pointing this out. Moving forward, I will be placing more conscientious attention to these details.
Ave Discord.
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I feel for you. Having good grammar be “corrected” into bad grammar is a pain I hope I will never endure.
And long may chaos render this world interesting.
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This was very intense, and beautiful at the same time. I actually thought she was in love with Coloratura at first.
Anyway, a quick search-and-replace should take care of the it's/its conundrum. Also, quick mention, I believe the manager's name is Sassy Saddles, rather than Sally - unless the auto-correct is to blame for that too.
Thanks again for the lovely story!
It has been a while since I've read some of these. And i can't figure out how to even open the stories....such a confusing interface this site has, hmff.
Going from memory though, this was a very moving story...and I love the artwork.