Lore-keeper for The Discordian Temple. Nonsense Non-servium. Ave Discord.
As Chrysalis holds her wife one night, Twilight just can't seem to doze off. The semi-newlyweds have cuddled their way into dreams many times but tonight, Twilight finds herself unable to rest. The alicorn dwells on a mare who held her like this before, when she was only a filly, chasing away the nightmares when her parents weren't around. She can still remember her sweet, sad singing- but what was that tune again...?
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Cradlerobber
Cute story I will give it 20 out of 99
The implications of Chrisi’s affection here could be very disturbing.
But the story is cute. I would go with out that last line or so. Just leave it a bit ambiguous. Trust your audience to know the identities.
Makes one wonder if Chrysalis knew it was destined or if Changelings might fall in love with the love of a specific pony.
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ahh the trouble of longevity you will be older then most everything lol
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Good point. This will definitely be addressed in the next story as it delves much deeper into the backstory of their connection and the world at large.
...huh...
Goodness but there are some ponies who seem to lack severely in the social etiquette and communication department...it's a shame, really.
But to be on point - I quite enjoy the tale of these eternal elements reuniting with each-other. The cuddles between Chryssi and Twilight are incredibly sweet, too. Makes me think of being wrapped in my special someponies arms <3 The title reminds me of another great story too - and that we also need to be making some audio records of your lovely tales.
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Pretty sure The Usual Suspects (tm) will have a lot to say before they even read it. *shrugs* Seems everybody with nothing better to do needs a windmill to tilt at, I suppose.
Oh let's wait and see how they respond to the origin story.
You are right though, hon. We need to get on the stick about that this coming month. It being LGBTQ history month it would make a passel of sense, as the series does deal pretty heavily in LGBTQ and History.
Can't say as I can think of a better gal to have in my corner helping me bring these things to life. 