Seven years before Twilight Sparkle, a curious creature arrives in Ponyville. How will they react to each other and this strange new world?
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Rarity probably will regret ever introducing him to that book. Then again he will be great at teaching the foals that game.
Looks like Rarity found her Kink
So I want to start with I hate stories that are written in a perpetual present tense, which is half the reason I didn't read the AB: Year One. That being said I slogged through it, the pacing for the relationship starting with Applejack is way too abrupt for my tastes, him just being fine naked and then and finding ponies sexy is equally jarring but honestly it seemed interesting enough and I could have kept going until I realized where this was going.
I hoped I was wrong that I was being paranoid but flashing over to the other story confirmed it. Why even make this change? Why make the crusaders his children? I literally cannot fathom. Well not going to downvote this or anything but you lost me on that.
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Re: Present tense - Yeah, i can understand that. Thanks for giving it a try regardless!
So, Heidao put it quite well as a comment in Year One (and it just so happens to be the highest upvoted comment on that story):
It explained far too much, especially because it was written before Season Nine came along.
They are so adorable together, I can't wait to she where this goes next ( no rush).
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Wait.....so the cmc are going to be sired by dog?! Im guessing ab by aj.....sweetie by rarity.....and.....wait scoots by dash? Hows that supposed to work if dash is trying to get in the wonderbolts and they are supposed to be about the wonderbolts above all else??
It's so funny that the narrator program that is hooked up to the website has problems with certain words and people putting into vert things like if you accidentally put an arrow key like this >< it will skip the whole sentence making it very difficult for people to understand what's going on there are others that does the same thing so keep in mind that not only that you got people who can read the stories you got the people who are reading by listening to the narrator but it's so funny that there's also other words that will not work like Source book if you put it together the narrator program would have a stroke and says something completely different.