Seven years before Twilight Sparkle, a curious creature arrives in Ponyville. How will they react to each other and this strange new world?
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How much longer is this gonna be compared to Year One? It's definitely taking longer to get to the romance and family stuff, but I don't know how long you plan to focus on that part once you get to it.
This is breaking my heart I hope that they make up soon,and that he gets her pregnant.
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Also I never said I didn't like the story, I just thought the MC was a putz.
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You know, I was even debating putting a remark about the MC in my previous comment. And I can see that; he's certainly willing to lay low, to keep his head down. Mostly because he's worried about the consequences of failure more so than what might happen were he to 'stand up for himself'. And I can see how a less assertive protagonist makes for a less compelling/interesting story. But he's getting there, as the possibility of getting run out of town is looking less likely.
Great chapter.