Seven years before Twilight Sparkle, a curious creature arrives in Ponyville. How will they react to each other and this strange new world?
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I hope he make a herd with the main seven plus both princess's.
Where is Applebloom in all this?
Good old character development
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She isn't born yet
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Wait... so is Buttercup still alive?
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This is a rewrite of the first story that the author did and based on it Applejack is Applebloom mother, Sweetie belle is rarity daughter, and Scootaloo is Rainbow dash daughter maybe not in that order
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Apple Bloom? Who is this pony? Haven't seen her around. Maybe she'll show up at some point, but not just yet. Also, spoilers!
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Buttercup, and Bright Mac, are both recently deceased.
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Sorry dude *zips mouth*
This is moving at a more realistic pace. I wonder how they will convince Dash to join? We know it will be a few years until Pinkie and Fluttershy join.
Kinda hoping for Zecora.
If this is gonna go the route of the mane
65 then we got a long road ahead of us.I call it that Apple Bloom is their first child!
And Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle his second and third!
Cutie Mark Crusaders Sisters! YAY!
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Oh god. Oh fuck
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In regards to comment by Master King:
That would be kewl to see.....ive yet to come across a story w a herd made up of the elements and the diarch princesses. Though i am in no way claiming to have read anywhere near all of the stories on this site. I dont think ive read even 5% of them lol.
I wonder how a herd like that would work though if Celestia wasnt the first mare to join and Luna the second? Or vice versa? Bc its hard for me to see Celestia or Luna being a junior mare who was 3rd to join at the earliest. I mean could you see one of them deferring to one of the mane 6? Lol
I loved this chapter. You really feel like you get a lot closer to doug and aj as they get closer. Though the thing that confused me was the fact of uis beimg conflicted yet not bout the whole "shes a pony so its technically bestiality but would it still be since she sentient" thing. Dont get me wrong....if i ended up in Equestria somehow id be overjoyed beyond belief.....but im pretty sure id struggle w that myself ....even if i dont when its not possible.
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Thanks! It would really depend on the rules and roles of the herd. They certainly don't order each other around just based on the order they joined. Perhaps they defer to the other's area of expertise, and otherwise are fairly independent. I'm sure it will come up when I continue after Errant Finale. As to the pony thing: quite early on he decided to consider them more as 'aliens' than as 'beasts', and even then they are very 'humanish' aliens.
I ain't sold on this one yet, 1st- no pants at all? Chamon especially doing manual labor gotta protect the bits. 2nd- Applejack is coming across as too desperate and these two after what 1or 2 days suddenly start a herd and talking bout foals and other mares? Can't live without you.... too fast bruh