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Brony-With-A-Fedora
American with a liking for this fandom, I might not post consistently. I also plan to write many stories.
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Consider my interest peaked. Also "whet" I laughed when I imagined her saying that please keep that spelling when she says that
Not to be mean or anything but slow the role of the story a bit it felt like I had no time to imagine the area they were in by the time they were trying to get out of the garage. Also they adjust a tad to quick the way it seems they were like awake, guns, dead guy, big scorpion, run , face scanner taking its time, garage, skycarrage , wasteland. Again not trying to be mean just wanna help the story and give helpful recommendations
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Thanks for the feed back, I just really wanted get to the wasteland, ill space it out. Sorry.
So, interesting concept. Reminds me of a movie in which 2 strangers were meant to be frozen for a year. Because death and an avalanche of errors they ended frozen for at least a hundred years.
So, while there were many errors you mostly just forgot to capitalize a few words. Would you like me to edit/proofread your story?
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if you could, I like writing but I have trouble with it sometimes. thank you for offering.
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Do you want me to just send you the corrections or rewrite the whole thing so you can just copy and paste?
I think you mean magazine fed. Now i am expecting them to have the M-1 Garand ping when they run out of rounds.
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thank you, I'll change it as soon as possible. thanks for the feedback.