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Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-It’s lovely seeing these two actually being romantic with each other.
-Lots of improper dialog tags in this story. Some examples: “Maybe I should,” Fluttershy smirked, in my vase,” Fluttershy walked past “Hey Fluttershy,” Discord’s widened yellow eyes landed on the smirking pegasus
-Seems odd that Fluttershy would be enamored with Discord’s “figure”. Discord is a lot of things, but ‘physically attractive’ isn’t something that would occur to me.
-Lacks conflict and resolution.
-Does it really need to be split into chapters when one chapter is less than 700 words long?
-Pretty chaotic sex scene, which is fitting ... but it was very rushed.
-Does things all in order and then it’s over ... which overall makes it predictable and a bit dull.
-Descriptions, especially of their bodies, are sparse.
-A bit surprising that Fluttershy would be bold enough to demand polyamory on a first date ... but maybe I’m missing character development from the prequel.
-Using all the holes -- even the ears! -- with only one partner is pretty interesting.

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 50/100
Allure: 30/100
Enticement: 20/100
Immersion: 40/100
Prose Quality: 80/100
Total Score: 220/500
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Thanks for the thorough review on how I can improve in future fics!

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-Seems odd that Fluttershy would be enamored with Discord’s “figure”. Discord is a lot of things, but ‘physically attractive’ isn’t something that would occur to me.

To Fluttershy, specifically? Consider that he is a lot of animals in one.

Ear sex, you say? I like the way you think and I'm totally going to write that at some point.

Now that she had bedded Applejack, Big Mac, Sugar Belle, and now the Element of Chaos, Fluttershy started thinking of another pegasus to sleep with...

Omg