Ever wake up one day, and realize you're a tree?
Probably not, unless you happen to be one very unhappy Pegasus. After waking up deep inside the Everfree, our hero (who may or may not remain nameless) quickly finds naught but disappointment as he lies trapped inside a massive oak. Of course, he doesn't stay trapped long, and soon he finds himself escapading around the Everfree with a rather odd entourage following in his footsteps.
(Any mistakes spotted would be appreciated. Thank's in advance and happy reading!)
Chapters (4)
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First chapter was very good! I like where this seems to be going!
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Well now, it would seem I'm rather late to my own comment section.
In all seriousness though, thank you all for giving me such a pleasant reception. It really does mean quite a bit to me.
That must of hurt Ever's in the feels, to know that he'd assisted Discord
Edit3: Fixed my spelling, and non-Arthur first
Still loving it! I do see much potential in this work. Also, "Allons-y"? Is that a potential Doctor Who reference, or are you actually just coincidentally using the phrase?
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Well thank you! Also, yes it was a bit of a reference to the good doctor.
Quick note folks, I do plan on taking a few darker twists and turns with the story, like the nightmare, so I added the dark theme (It's the Everfree for Celestia's sake - it's supposed to be dark) and bumped it up to teen. If this bothers you, say something and I will change it back. Probably.
Also, speaking of the nightmare I must say I've never written anything like that. How good was it? (honest question)
This chapter as a whole had a few (4?) spelling mistakes. Nice/well done
The Nightmare bit: Not bad, I couldn't connect to it beyond the childhood fears part (Saml size/being powerless) but not badly done
i deeply apologize for any of the few who've been waiting on the next chapter.
I've been really busy juggling this between school and friends and other things, not to mention that I'm already out of material for the dark side of things. So I'm sticking with a good old adventure romp type thing. There may be more serious topics, but nothing to push it over into another genre.
Sorry again for the wait, but with any luck it should be out by [insert date here]!
I find myself asking that question far too often
Also, incorrect hoard, you want horde. Incorrect new, you want knew.
Besides that,
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Oh dear me. Well, I was bound to mess up somewhere, so thank you for the catch!
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*poke* Are you still around? It's been quite some time since the last update and I really like the idea behind this story...