Hurt between sisters.

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During their heated argument, Celestia says some things she shouldn't have. And it hits Luna harder than she thought it would.

Now Celestia has to figure out how to fix the problem and show her sister how loved she really is.

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Chapter One. · 27th Aug 2019 · 1,020 words
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Chapter Two. · 28th Aug 2019 · 1,202 words
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Chapter Three. · 31st Aug 2019 · 1,012 words
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Kyuubi325

Kyuubi325 #1 · Aug 28th, 2019 · 2 · · Chapter One. ·

Pretty good start, though I was expecting Luna to go along the lines of ignoring her sister whenever she comes back or even taking a break from even being in her presence all together. But I do like the argument and how they responded to each other, very in character.

TheShadowKnight

TheShadowKnight #2 · Aug 28th, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter One. ·

"Everyone loves Fluttershy!" Said Pinkie as she bounced agian.

Pinkie ain’t wrong.

Bolted Sky

Bolted Sky #3 · Aug 28th, 2019 · · · Chapter One. ·

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I was thinking of going that route myself. But the story just sort of progressed into what it is, if that makes any sense. Glad you like it so far.

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No she's not

ABadger

ABadger #4 · Aug 29th, 2019 · · · Chapter One. ·

Strong cliffhanger, In Medias Rei. Powerful. It could definetly use more description in terms of sentences, but the substance is there. I hope to read more of this in the future.

Bolted Sky