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I have a story in my heart and a party in my pants.

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Comment posted by MannedGeorge123 deleted Jul 16th, 2019

Oh hey! A new HiE aaaaaaand the human is a submissive coward... welp here we go again.

Der-Artz owner of Queen Eunomia and her Trojan comment being deleted.derpicdn.net/img/2019/3/4/1977066/full.png

Oh ok, I just thought it was bizarre because you really didn't say anything


Der-Artz and I have come to an understanding, though we can consider the new female lead/fapping target to be a palette swap of Eunomia.

I've been really enjoying this so far. Can I ask what other fetishes if any do you plan including?

You’ll just have to wait and see. This is a story I’m writing as both an experiment and for personal gratification so there are some fetishes I’ll revisit more than others.

Honestly, the more I read this the more I want to be in this guy's position.

As much as I would enjoy being in Sebastian's position, I don't think I would be able to call Aphrodise 'Mummy'. I never even called my own mother that. It was always either 'Mum' or 'Ma'.
But that's just me.

Question: Would we be allowed to suggest fetishes to put in or do you want to just keep it you your own fetishes?

“If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it.”

― Toni Morrison

And it just so happens that I want a story about an amorous, voluptuous, amazonian Alicorn nursing a human who happens to be be two thirds her height back to health and treating him to sex along the way.

So no. I will not be taking requests for included fetishes. Que sera sera.

Fair enough. Either way, I am still very much enjoying this story so please keep up the good work kind sir.

Skin? So are they anthro ponies, or humanoids? You saying theyou have skin, a lack of their physical description, and a lack of his surprise to seeing what are clearly not humans makes me think they aren't anthro ponies.

Honestly this chapter seems a bit less entertaining than previous ones. I still liked it, just not as much as the previous ones.

... I was laughing too much to properly enjoy the sex.


I don't think you understood why this question was asked:
Some people don't like certain fetishes. We all know this.

Those people don't want to get "emotionally invested" in a story that they don't want to read because it contains fetishes they dislike. It's not about asking for spoilers or ruining a story plot.

Similar if a person wants to read a romance and the couple is together for 15 chapters. Then war breaks out and graphic depictions of violence and death are described. The reader didn't want to read about death, and abandons the story. They never know how the story ends and they feel like they wasted their time.

It would be better to know up front what fetishes are in the story, so the readers can make better and informed decisions about what stories they want to read. It's as simple as that.

I agree that it would be nice to know which fetishes are being explored in each chapter, but at the same time, the unpredictability of it is what makes it interesting.

Yes, Thank you. This is what I was going after.

It has nothing to do with predictability. I don't need to know what each chapter is going to be about, I'd just like to know what themes/fetishes are going to show up in the story. It's not fun to have something that's a turnoff popping up unexpectedly when I'm getting invested in a story, causing me to drop it.

Then for the sake of anyone trawling the comments, I'll get these points out of the way.

I am trying to write a story that I would want to read. And that want has since evolved past just fetishy smut to include tender and heavy moments too.

And the following subjects/fetishes will never have a place in this or any other story that I may produce:
-pedophilia/foalcon (or whatever this community calls it and I feel filthy just writing those words)

Now, back to the writing desk.

Not to sound impatient, but it there an update regarding the next chapter of this story?

Ah, good, another breast dimension, perfect for our named anon to lewd in. Sigh.

A boob and butt boy to the end. No mention of anything else, the Queen must not have anything else. RIP those wings though, preening can be fun...

It lives! 😍

begin die massage der brust.

I think some german slipped through here.

My name is Sebastian so I just found the perfect self insert fic.

Before she clambers into bed she looks out the window at the night sky and the beautiful waning moon. “Excellent job tonight Lulu.” She whispers before she climbs into bed. She wraps her arm around your middle and lets slumber claim her. Tomorrow is going to be a big day and even she needs enough sleep to face it.

Is she Luna and celestias mom or older sister?

They are blood relatives but I plan to reveal just how close they are later.

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