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Game-BeatX14


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Nice story. Pretty unique, too. I haven't any that take such a light/silly take on breast shrinking through extreme sucking. I've already looked at your other stories and this one is probably my favorite, though, the one with Fluttershy and the elephant isn't too bad. I hope to see more stories in a similar vein from in the future. Maybe you could expand to using an industrial strength vacuum on a mare's crotch and inadvertently giving them a prolapse. It really just depends on how weird and silly you want to go.

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I definitely want to try more weird fics involving vacuums or extreme milking, though I'm not sure about the prolapse thing... It sounds too much like an actual injury that would painful, and hard to write about in an appealing way. Regardless, I appreciate the comment and suggestion. Thanks for the follow! :twilightsmile:

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

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I've got an idea for a follow-up: perhaps after they return the cursed vacuum cleaner a stallion ends up purchasing it and tries to use it for some 'milking' of his own, but the suction ends up being so strong it sucks out not only every last drop of his cum but somehow his mind as well, leaving him too dumb to turn it off so it just keeps sucking up all his pleasure.

Flitter pointed the hose at the pile of refuse. The vacuum began sucking it all in from across the room. Everything from napkins and egg shells, to larger objects like empty milk cartons were easily swallowed by the hungry beast.

Better keep it away from your stamp collection...

For the love of Celestia, just please don't turn it on high or it'll probably rip the paint off the walls. We don’t want to ruin anything around here.

That is, until she saw Flitter gazing down at her melons with the vacuum still running.
"Um, Flitter? What are you staring like that for?"
The enraptured mare couldn't help herself from thinking dirty thoughts.

We can't blame her; can we?


Good story!
I wonder how Flitter would look like once she is let out. I mean, she was whirled around with lots of milk...

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Ooh, thanks for sharing that clip! I love to see super powerful vacuums animated like that. And yeah, Flitter's fur would probably be white from all the milk she soaked up. :raritywink:

“Time to see what this baby can do. What should we clean up first?”(—— She asked, while affixing a large cylindrical extension to the main tube. Cloudchaser pointed to a pile of garbage in the kitchen nearby.

“Anything else we can pick up? It’s kind of satisfying, not gonna lie.“(——

9901286 Thanks for pointing out the missing quotes. Fixed. :twilightsmile:

Loved everything on the story, except for the ending.

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