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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
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*reads description*
If I took a shot for every punctuation mark I found, I’d still be safe to drive.
I also find it tremendously hilarious that a story called MY Life is written in 2nd person.
I warned you of at the end of ch2 im not good at it and if you have any pointers the fire away
now this
is edgy
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if anyone can help i am looking for an editor because like i said i'm shit at writing and need a little help
You gotta pick 1st person or 3rd, having both just wont work
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if you wish for me to fix it can you quote the certain parts and i would be glad to fix it
First off excuse my earlier comment i meant 2nd person not 3rd
Notice how in the first sentence it starts like I did so and so and then the second sentence starts with you did this or that
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my bad i edited this earlier and must have missed it thanks and sorry ive been looking for a proof reader and so far no one wants to help ill go fix it now thanks again