• Member Since 26th Apr, 2019
  • offline last seen Jul 1st, 2023

Glassy


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*reads description*

If I took a shot for every punctuation mark I found, I’d still be safe to drive.

I also find it tremendously hilarious that a story called MY Life is written in 2nd person.

I warned you of at the end of ch2 im not good at it and if you have any pointers the fire away

9740115
if anyone can help i am looking for an editor because like i said i'm shit at writing and need a little help

You gotta pick 1st person or 3rd, having both just wont work

9740542
if you wish for me to fix it can you quote the certain parts and i would be glad to fix it

First off excuse my earlier comment i meant 2nd person not 3rd

I woke up and start to sit up but felt dizzy for a moment. "Oww my head." You look up as the alarm goes off.

Notice how in the first sentence it starts like I did so and so and then the second sentence starts with you did this or that

9740876
my bad i edited this earlier and must have missed it thanks and sorry ive been looking for a proof reader and so far no one wants to help ill go fix it now thanks again

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