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"Monstrous Size Has No Intrinsic Merit. Unless Inordinate Exsanguination Be Considered A Virtue" - Darkest Dungeon

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This story is a sequel to Do As I Say...


Anon has become much more than just a friend to Celestia in the short two years he has been in Equestria. A complicated relationship will blossom and bloom through the many hardships of combining two lives so differently lived.

I hope this lives up to the expectations. It probably won't but I tried. I highly suggest reading the prequel to this if you have not, without doing so the beginning of this will make very little sense.

For those of you who care, this was really hard. Going from a work of whimsy to an actual story is difficult. I promise to finish this even if it takes a while between updates.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 12 )

So far, this story is pretty good. I can't wait to see what else you have planned for our Sunbutt princess and her human suitor. Hopefully something saucy and fun. Keep up the good work and stay safe.

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Thank you for the kind words. There are some fun things in the works for our beloved sun horse and local human.

I'm a sucker for cute Celestia falling for a human. Very much looking forward to reading this one.

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Hi, uh, I'm glad you like the story. I loved Alls Fair in Love and War 1&2 and am currently catching up on Warm. It's very weird having someone who has written some of the best stories on the site (in my opinion) comment on my story. I also forgot to like them, my bad

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Aww thank you so much ❤️
I really appreciate that. I do try to do my best. I just read the prequel to this and I loved it. You have a lot of potential to write great stories!

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You'll be happy to know the next chapter is on the way after my editor gets to it in the next day or so. I reread both of my stories and go, "Wow this is garbage." Is that just a thing or am I just anxiety incarnate? Also, prepare for feels.

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Thats normal lol. Can't tell you how many times I've felt that way about my own stories. I will be looking forward to the feels.

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Thanks for the reassurance and congrats on the top spot on the featured page.

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Well thank you! I'll look forward to more updates on this story 🙂

Not bad, if a little rough. Kinda feels like the ageless alicorn has the romantic maturity of a teenager, which kinda threw me off, but still a solid chapter. I kind of agree with your editor for this chapter though, it could use a couple commas, maybe an extra " ; " here or there.

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Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. Celestia's (oddness) without getting into spoiler territory will be explained later, it does have the Alt. universe tag for a reason. ;) It is also my first real foray into writing and it shows. I am still learning the ins and outs of creative writing.

Short but sweet. :yay:

I genuinely love stories that delve into Celestia's past like this.

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