You gotta pick 1st person or 3rd, having both just wont work

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if you wish for me to fix it can you quote the certain parts and i would be glad to fix it

First off excuse my earlier comment i meant 2nd person not 3rd

I woke up and start to sit up but felt dizzy for a moment. "Oww my head." You look up as the alarm goes off.

Notice how in the first sentence it starts like I did so and so and then the second sentence starts with you did this or that

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my bad i edited this earlier and must have missed it thanks and sorry ive been looking for a proof reader and so far no one wants to help ill go fix it now thanks again