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It burns but causes no pain. It stings but leaves no scars.
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Just a few spelling corrections for you to fix. (mistakes are underlined)
you said "sent the" twice
maybe add "to" at the end of that sentence?
you forgot the capital letter
Is it supposed to say "completely" twice?
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Oof, thanks for the proofreading. I tried correcting my own errors but some things are bound to fly under the radar sometimes. The missing and/or doubled letters are an annoying quirk my keyboard tends to do when I hit some of the keys. I remember correcting a bunch of those before posting the fic.
this was really good great job