The cake twins were given their own bakery for their eighteenth birthday. After a few years of planning, they are ready to go out, and start their own adventure. The twins love for eatch other go deeper then any normal sibling relationship. Can they accept their own love.
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Hello everyone, this is gonna be my first story here. Funny enough is a Twincest story for the april contest. I really hope you all like it. If the story dose well I'll keep updating it.
Chapters (1)
An insect story without a sex tag? Well I can't say this story isn't original. Please respond to this comment.
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I mean, what person would try to write about two bugs doing the birds and the bees?
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Lol, I know it's rare to see that I went to do that exact thing lol ouo
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XD
Is English even your first language?
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"Saddly is me only one, I is just bad grammer"
-Keyboard with Hooves 2019
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Bro, as you responded to this I already went through and edited the story. Even though I made a joke response, I went through and checked everything. I am well aware I'm bad at grammer so I listened.
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Lol
Great beginning I can't wait for the next chapter 👍
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Thank you, I'm gonna make a one shot for the contest, but after that I will make the next chapter.
Don't worry, won't be too long
Finished reading your fic for the contest and wanted to leave some of my notes for you.
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I think there were glimmers of something really nice here and I think you should keep working at it. I'd learn to embrace editing because it'll help to improve your final product. A lot of the little errors I found were things which can be caught during editing and, if fixed, could have really improved the overall readability of the fic.
The world needs more cake twins, so keep at it.
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Thank you so much for the feed back. I'll really appreciate the help with my writing
I saw you have decided to continue this. That makes me really happy. I love the feels between the twins. Capturing the feel of a mixing of romantic love and sibling relationship can be hard and yet you did it quite well. I'm really looking forward to more.