Princess Flurry Heart and a humble baker's son are in love. But how can they hope to be together when the world is full of forces beyond the powers of ponies that try to tear them apart?
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Absolutely adorable !
This felt like I was watching a hilarious episode of Rugrats.
Fantastic! I love the blend of epic tone and juvenile vocabulary. This definitely wasn't what I expected when I saw you reserve this pairing, but I have to love what you've done with it. Best of luck in the contest, though you probably aren't going to need it.
Hilarious and adorable!
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Thanks Glad you enjoyed it!
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Thanks! I got it in on the last day Maybe next time I'll start earlier than one week before the deadline.
And yes. Oh, the torrid passions of babies...
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*Luna passes the popcorn*
No, sorry. This completely failed for me. I'm afraid it just did not work at all in the objective it tried to accomplish.
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Because now I'm TOTALLY shipping Pound and Flurry Heart!
This certainly was adorable.
That last bit where they meet in the Dreamscape reminds me of a certain Calvin and Hobbes comic
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Curses! My plan has been foiled! And it's all because of those adorable kids and their meddling
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Good old Calvin and Hobbes.
Wat did I just read
This is my favorite kind of dumb and inane.
That, was absolute adorability. And now, I too ship the adorability pair of adorableness! LET THE FICS OF FUTURE EVENTS INCLUDE HILARITY OF POUND/FLURRY AND MAY THEY BE ADORABLE! And possibly hilarious when Pumpkin pokes fun at the whole spiel!
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Your profile picture makes your comment more hilarious, no offense
Pass the popcorn, Luna!
7529424 I don't know either, but I loved it, and I'm pretty sure Gummy was narrating.
This is cute and melodramatic to an almost unbearable degree. Somewhere, Rarity is proud.
I was trying to eat cereals while reading this.
It was a mistake.
AAAAW THAT´S SO CUTE! the way little ponies interpret everything is just PRECIOUS
This seems to be a valid response. Also this was adorable, I'm definitely gonna read it again.
This is so cute, I love how Pound and Flurry Heart perceive everything from their little baby perspectives!
This is adorable as fuck and you are a good person. :D
I just knew it was going to be brought up.
This is the cutest and funniest damned thing. I hate you! I love you! So awesome!
I'm going to be sick
It's as if you put in a romance novel inside "The Rugrats"
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No offense, but the latest episode (s07e03) did a better job of sinking this ship than this story did. It's still a fun read.
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Nope, I'm still convinced.
Besides, some friendships (et al) start somewat confrontationally (Rarity and Applejack, for example.)
(Also, the episode was hilarious and reminded by very much of my nephews, who are about the same ages.)
This was so adorable! Awesome idea of writing of a ship that I've been hoping to see. This story was just to sweet!
I have reviewed this here.
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Nice!
Omg this is so adorable!
This is too cute !
This was adorable!
did this, hope you derive some enjoyment from it.
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That's awesome
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...Did I just watch an episode of Rugrats?
This is the most adorable tragedy I've ever read.
This is too damn adorable, Pound and Flurry Heart being in love without realising it or knowing what romance is
SO cute! I love the cute baby romance and how they felt torn when they were apart, and how they fought to get each other back, and how the Princesses were just watching them talk in their dreams, LOL. The purest and most innocent form of romance! 10/10 would read again!