Octavia and Vinyl had made such a great friendship together, which is why Octavia was sad when Vinyl left for the big city of Manehatten. They talked on the phone lot for sometime now but now Octavia plans on visiting her friend. However, Vinyl wasn't just playing her music in her night club. She had also created one of the biggest criminal origination in the city ranging from robbery, drug trafficking, and illegal prostitution. Octavia has always been a classy pony, but Vinyl is about to take her on a ride of life! From the author: I don't think I'll actually write this fanfic. This was something I wrote after playing to much Saints Row: The Third, hope you enjoy it however.
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this seems to have an interesting prospect...........
lol not bad not bad... but I found the GTA reference... You can't mix serious GTA with hilarious SR3... the results could be disastrous.
The idea is, well, wonderful. The execution was lacking-- a flaw which, given that it's a semi-abandoned project (judging by the author's note in the description), is understandable. You tend to gloss over things, like saying she flew the chopper for... four minutes, I believe? That should have been four minutes of dramatic chase, not just four minutes of transition before she crashes the helicopter (and survives with no explanation of how she did so, much less how she was completely uninjured). It left me feeling like it was an outline rather than a full-fledged story-- again, understandable given it's status.
Anyway, cheers for the idea. I may try my hand at a similar story if that's okay with you, or I may not... I always plan to write something someday, and never seem to get around to it.
Well yeah this was something I just wrote in the middle of the night after playing Saints Row 3. Wanted to get an idea out there of introducing the 2 ponies we see together in art (Vinyl n Octavia) into a life crime, a spoof of Saints Row if I may add. If I wanted to actually write the whole story I add a bit more detail.