• Member Since 11th Dec, 2011
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The young crusaders have their tree house, they have their capes, the dream of getting their cutie marks, all they need now is something to get them around Ponyville as they search for their cutie marks! A Go-Kart, tis what they try to build. But they'll need to do a lot of research if they wish to build they dream kart; such as, the mathematics, the tools, supplies, and most importantly... an actual plan with details sketch instead of a drawing of them riding a go-kart.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

Short but sweet :twilightsmile:

Good premise. Could do with a pre-reading though; I saw a few mistakes and awkward phrases in there.

lol Poor Twilight! :twilightangry2:

Liking it so far. Can't wait to see more :pinkiehappy:

:scootangel::unsuresweetie::applecry:

NIce idea, I can't wait to read more of it when you continue on with the story.:pinkiehappy:

Poor cherile an't gona know what hit her

Please. Please. Please write dialogues the normal way. This is how not you write dialogues. :ajbemused:

Sorry it took me so long to write the next short chapter... don't ask why, I blame the military I work for lol. Anyways here's the next short chapter I'll be writing the next chapter soon I promise, cross my heart hope to fly stick a cupcake in my AAHHH! :pinkiehappy:

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