Well, this is different. I wonder where the trip leads.

The blanking machine was used to destroy minds, not change to female... you wanted the Switching Machine

Oh God, not this again

Ok, thanks! I'll be sure to change that.

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Deleted that section, Thanks!

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What would the Machine look like? Is it similar to the other machine, or is it the same way that I had described?

How can I make this story better? 🤔

9581951 if I remember correctly, it’s kinda like a rack table that they strap the male in to and use magic runes on the table to force the male in to a female form, complete inside and out... the Blanking machine is a head gear piece they put on a female that literally erases their minds... the erasure is so complete that their cutie mark fades away too, symbolizing that they no longer have a destiny or identity.

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If you think this story has potential, do you want to collaborate? 🙂

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I wish :( sadly, my life is busy and tiring atm... i’d Love to collab sometime, but as it stands, i’ve Not even had time for my RP groups for more than 5 minutes like twice a week >.< I could offer advice and maybe proof read some times?

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Ok thanks! I'm busy too. The only time I have to work on this story is at night. I stay up until 1 or 2 am. btw, I'm working on revising the first chapter.

I see you cancelled the story. For good, or for a redraft?

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For a redraft.

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I understand. One thing, though: If you publish the new version, you should expect to get crushed under downvotes again. This is not an attempt to get you to stop, I'm one of FoE's old school followers, it's just the reality of what will happen on FimFiction.

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Ok... I'm trying my best to fix my reputation on Fimfiction. Downvotes won't get in the way of me making a better story!

I wish it wasn't cancelled

The next one will be better, I promise.

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...And now this one's uncancelled ("Incomplete"), even though there seems to be a new version posted. I'm confused.