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Yelilia


A mess but I try my best!

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Sora awakens in a world he does not know with only one thought in mind: Kairi.
But the meeting with a group of girls with strange skin colors could help him in his mission, that is to go home to her and her friends.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 45 )

Consider my interest piqued. Hope your doing okay. :3

Does this "Take place" after the events of Kingdom Hearts III? After Sora "DIES" (ignoring the contents of the secret ending) before the credits begin.

Ah Sora In Canterlot instead of shibuya.
Plus events after kingdom hearts 3 in the Equestria girls world wonder how riku will react plus I wonder how will Yen Sid find this world as well plus wonder how roxas will fit in this story

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Apparently it dose because secret movie Sora wakes up in the middle of the street same goes at the start

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Sora’s nobody that comes back in kingdom hearts 3 who carries oblivion and Oathkeeperi.pinimg.com/originals/07/79/c2/0779c28e19bf9016a498c2bf050d1dca.jpg

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Exactly, the story starts with the events of the final ending where Sora wakes up in a city all alone

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I have lots in my mind, you'll know everything if you keep reading :pinkiesmile: And I'd really like if you do

Is Roxas going to be in this story?

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Who knows.. maybe! Can't say :pinkiesad2:

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If you need any ideas let me know because I have a lot of ideas for this kind of crossover.

I like this. <3

"Kairi? Who is Kairi? Man, you must have beaten hard your head!”

the way a native English speaker would say that is "got hit hard."... I think... It's better at least:unsuresweetie:

Shrill and high-pitched. Anyone who spoke began to appear clearly in front of the boy's eyes.

I would use "the owner of the voice." I associate "anyone who [did the thing]" with multiple people having done so and you're just like ":facehoof:whoever was involved just... face the consequences."

Long and intricate pink curly hair fell on the shoulders of a light-skinned girl, but unusually tending to a too pastel pink, large blue eyes, slender legs covered by long amphibians and a slight dress with bizarre colors on it,

Amphibians include various types of frogs, toads, newts, and salamanders. Also why the too?:rainbowhuh:

careless of the rain and of the wind she had the courage to wear a summer clothing.

ummm... in my mind you can't quantify clothes by number alone and I typically clarify what I'm counting (i.e. "I found a really cute shirt" or "in the new series pinkie wears a skirt that really fits her personality")

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I meant why would he have anything to do with the story, he had his happy ending why would he want to folow Sora or be a part of this story?

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Well if I have to put it this way Roxas is possibly Sora’s brother and he is a dual wielding Keyblade warrior and the fact that he might not have anything to do at Twilight town with the gang.

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Are you saying this is just a reimagining of kingdom hearts characters and not a straight crossover?? I have seen no idication that this is the case!

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I don’t know but let the author add more chapters and then you can rethink that question plus that’s only my hypothesis on how Roxas will be in this story.

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Thanks, you're kind:pinkiesmile:

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Thanks for corrections and advice, it's hard for me sometimes, my knowledge of English is not very big but I try to do my best

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There won't be any reimagining of kingdom hearts characters, they'll be characterized by their original characteristics, there may be some IRRELEVANT changes, but nothing as drastic as taking away the "title" to Roxas as ex nobody of Sora :pinkiesmile:

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You’re welcome heck I am going to start fanfic as well but only have Keyblades in it but I will need help with it.

Nice cover art by the way

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We can talk about it =)

Second question: When in the EqG timeline is Sora in? I imagine between after "Friendship Games" to after "Roller Coaster of Friendship". Maybe you canintegrate the upcoming "Spring Break-down" special into this story after it airs.:raritywink:

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I don't follow a specific timeline, the story and the events will be led by my imagination :twilightsmile:

Where;d you find the cover art?

I’ve read a ton of crossovers with kingdom hearts with mlp, and to say that this one takes place after kh3 is a wonderful new spin. I’m really curious on where this is going. Hopefully this won’t falll in too many cliches, and sora not overwhelmingly depressed at not finding this friends. Drama in kingdom hearts is a bit finicky. But hey it’s your story, write with what you want!

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Someone sent me

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Hey! Thanks for reading. Sora’s not about to be that depressed in all chapters but it’s just the second and he woke up in a city he doesn’t know, after saving Kairi and with no certainties that she came back home safe as he wanted, so it’s important to be a little worried. But we know really well Sora, he doesn’t give up. And anyway I thought about twists that I think you won’t expect (or at least hope that) :twilightsmile:

Nice going with the arguments that Sora and Donald have almost every game plus nice going with the blue comet idea plus I already know Pinkie is going to explode if she somehow finds out who Sora really is like she done with princess Twilight in the first movie.

"I'm sure something has come to us!" Pinkie began. "Only we haven't found it yet ... or maybe it's under our eyes and we don't notice it "

Pinkie knows that Sora fell from the sky and to be fair this is his second or third time doing it I’m counting it if it’s in a game and fanfic that’s after kingdom hearts 3
P.S nobody believes pinkie because she breaks all kinds of logic and as many fanfics that have pinkie in them I think this will be of good use.
“It’s Pinkie Pie don’t question it”

Plus will sora fall in love with any of the girls and if yes will Flash or ventus go out with Kairi if Sora goes out with some one else
:twilightsmile::raritystarry:

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Flash Sentry the guy that plays the guitar that also ask princess Twilight to go to the fall formal with him in the first movie

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Yeah I know, just wanted to understand why him lmao anyway I answered you in private

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I don’t know maybe because Flash has a thing for princesses if you know what I mean with pony Twilight

Any reason why Rainbow is unusally hostile towards Sora or boys specifically in this fic so far? Even in the other EQG films and shorts she is only competive or adreline driven rather misandrist. She also got along fine with Flash, Timbur, Micro Chips Sandal Wood, and Bulk Biceps. So why here?

Unless this her being overly protective, but it still seems a bit much. Especially since Sora literally did nothing to garner such a response.

Also while Sora is not the most brightest and literally is technologicallly challeged, (his smashing of Ansem The Wise's keyboard & "I don't computer"), he has used the internet before.

How else was he able to use thise Gummiphone image message posts so frequently. Also he has LITERALLY been inside it twice, (Space Paranoids/The Grid).

Plus was told about the events of RE:coded by Mickey, Donald, Goofy, Chip and Dale. You can be still aware what something IS without knowing the finer mechanics of or how operate it.

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I highly doubt Sora will drop his life long childhoid crush and love interest over some girls he literally just met.

Kairi and Sora not only FINALLY shared a Papou Fruit withother, but also confessed their feelings toward the other.

Besides not only is their "ship/pairing" canon, but also he JUST got done rescuing her by selflessly risked SACRIFICING his own Body, Heart and Soul in the process.
Yeah, he is not quiting that Princess of Light island girl anytime soon.

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If you read the ending of first chapter, you see Sunset says that Sora's not like the other one, because he's too stupid. So it implicitly refers to something that happened to the girls, and especially to Rainbow, with a certain guy, before Sora arrived. The story about it will be known in the next chapters. That's because Rainbow is hostile towards him.

Sora has come close to something similar to the internet during his travels, it's true but it was presented to him in a totally different way, often as just data or digital worlds. He never knew what's google for example, neither to search for iformations with it.

About gummiphones we can say that the only things that Sora uses are videocalls and images, but he doesn't go on internet with it. The instagram posts that appear to us between loads are probably just something that creators wanted to add for game aesthetics. It is really unlikely that someone took that photos and put 'em on a social network. Especially because no one, at the most photos, could ever take them in the postures that characters assume.

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The other is Riku or Yezora it’s obviously one of them plus yezora and riku look almost the same

"You shouldn't be here" StarSwirl's voice frightened him, making him jump up from his chair in seconds. "You told me I could use the computer" Sora replied confused, feeling embarrassed. Had he broken the computer by accident? It was not his intention. "You shouldn't be here" He repeated "Boy, I say this for you" he lowered his voice, approaching Sora cautiously. "This is not a place for who's ali-"

StarSwirl must have met Xehanort or at least know about the Keyblade war and the Keyblade plus poor Sora I guess he would have had it more easy if Tron was there because we all know that he could help Sora with a computer

I'm going to say this as nicely as possible but...get a beta. A native English writer. Your writing is...rough. It's just a step above Google translate. The idea and concept is good, it's the writing itself that needs work.

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