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Elements of nature12 stories ·19 members

Elements of Nature

A war is heading towards Equestria, can these new heroes prevent it or will it consume them? In this story after the introductions I will let all of you decide the outcome of their fates! Will they succeed, be consumed be war, decide to end all life.....

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Earth · 6th Aug 2012 · 844 words
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Wind · 7th Aug 2012 · 615 words
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water · 10th Aug 2012 · 662 words
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Schorcht

Schorcht #1 · Aug 8th, 2012 · · · Wind ·

Interesting thing you have going on here. Looks to be something that might lead to something cool. The fact that you want the viewers to have a direct impact on the future is something new to me so I hope when the time comes I can have an effect. Did notice some slight errors but not enough for me to rant and complain. One thing I will say. Try adding some more detail to the things going on, I feel as if some of the things depicted are rushed and I have no time to imagine what is going on. Either way it still looks very good! Keep up the creativity! Hope to see more soon and have a great day!

Denza