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She must have been the most beautiful and pure creature in the world, a beloved and respected goddess.
But a destiny imposed by others can cling like a snake and suffocate.
For this, she will regain control of her destiny.
Even if this will kill a goddess.
Warning
This story doesn't follow the show's canon.
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And no. Bonus for doing this and not something else. But I can't like how you write Celestia. Not cool. Even if it's just for one story.
One thing. It's the story itself that must be 1000 or more words. Not the chapters themselves.
1. Donut Joe is a Unicorn. Everyone in Canterlot is.
2. Twilight is a sheltered, immature child. She has never seen true combat, nor a true conflict, even. Her ideas of militarization are completely out of character.
4. There is no such thing as a "Winged Empire" of the Griffons. Griffonstone is a slum.
5. If Diamond Dogs have guns, Equestria is fucked.
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1-My Fault.
2-You right, but tecnically she studied under the ruler of her kingdom, was close to the nobles and her brother is the captain of the guards. Besides, she studies a lot, even if she lacks the practice. And this story doesn't follow the canon.
4-My Story, My World, and in My World griffins have a powerful kingdom.
5-I never said Diamond Dogs, i just said Dog. They are two different groups
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My fault.
And for Celestia, she is little OOC, but you'll soon find out why.
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I'm sorry.
It's the first time I write fanfiction in English
I will improve.
I see the story has some potential. You save some errors like how it’s different from cannon. I know it’s a diffrent world, that's why there is an Alternet Universe tag. Sometimes when you show that they are talking you do ‘»’ with the regular quotation marks.
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I feel so stupid. Thank you for telling me about the Alternative Universe.
About the quotation marks, I wrote this story in Italian, and we use those type of quotation marks.
I changed them, but I must have forgotten some of them. ^^"
Doesn't the alternate universe tag make that go without saying?
Very fun story, comrade! We're both fallen!
Tolle Geschichte hoffe jedoch, dass du sie bald fortsetzt, ein volles Jahr zwischen zukünftigen Kapiteln würde wahrscheinlich einige Leser vergraulen, oder besser gesagt kann ich mir keinen anderen Grund für die Negativen Bewertungen vorstellen.
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Bro, die Seite ist english, der Autor Italiener, dein Kommentar deutsch.
Finde den Fehler.
Google Translate gibts sogar als browser add-on. 'N Kommentar in der richtigen Sprache kost selbst den faulsten Menschen nur zwei Mouse Klicks.