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Patrick Porter was just a normal brony hanging out at Bronycon, but after hearing of people going missing he decides to check out the vendor in which all the people had last been see. But after a chance encounter with a Red and Pink wig, He ends up transformed into EQG's Babs Seed.

Part of the https://www.fimfiction.net/group/214042/canterlot-adventures collab from Equestria Girls from EQ Girls Babs POV.

If you want a character, contact Apple Bloom (The Blue EM2) via PM. Needed are characters at CHS
and at Crystal Prep Academy (students, staff, as well as Principal Celestia and Vice-Principal Luna), as well as other community members like Filthy Rich and his Wife. Also, needed are members of the Apple family.

We are in the Legend of Camp Everfree arc, and we need Timber spruce.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425481/canterlot-adventures- Mah cousin, Apple Bloom
[url=https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425500/canterlot-
adventures-]https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425500/an-apple-to-the-core
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425396/the-belle-rings-true - Sweetie Belle
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425505/a-case-of-the-scoots - Scootaloo
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425903/when-lightning-strikes - Rainbow Dash
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425429/rainbows-times-two - Rainbow "Double R" Rose (Rainbow Dash's cousin)
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425595/of-booze-and-berries - Ms. Berry Punch (History teacher at CHS)

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/426129/in-the-twilight-hour - Twilight "Sci-Twi" Sparkle
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425677/power-of-the-cybernetic-soldier - Tempest Shadow (CHS's Girls Physical Education Teacher).


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Chapters (1)
Comments ( 36 )

Ohlala, This Oneshot is very interesting*Continues to read*

It was at this moment that all of Babs Seed's memories flooded Patrick's mind, leaving her with two sets of precious memories and a new life full of adventure and excitement.

Patrick, why did ya'r memory came flooding all of the sudden

9410044
I just couldn't think up any other way for my OC to get Babs Memories into the story.

9410060
yep, True words. I know the pain of having to make an OC

so far, so good!

If you need help with the next part (being at Sweet apple acres with the family and eating the pie, as well as enrolling at CHS, let me and The Blue EM2 Apple Bloom know.

9410164
Does there need to need to be more? This story was just ment for me enter in the canterlot advantures eqg collab.

9410305
I was just confised as to the fact that it has the complete tag. I'd got the impression you'd be writing stuff that was happening from now on from Babs' perspective.

9410164
well, I think you should add more to your story, like how the new Babs seed is interacting with her new family, school, meeting the other students and also the other older girls (mane 6 characters, etc).

9410423
Unfortunately, I cannot do that if I don't know where Babs enters in the narrative.

9410427
maybe just before the Friendship games? She would attend classes with the cmc and maybe watch as the other apple bloom nearly falls into one of the portals when Midnight sparkle opens them. But she would be happy to see her cousin back from the dead, so to speak, as somehow "Tom" replaced apple bloom after that I think.

WE were planning to do our take on Legends of Camp everfree and of course, Babs would come along for the week camping trip. imagine her reaction to Gaea Everfree or her cousin AJ with her Crystal Guardian super strength pony up thing from those Geodes that are found in the cave by Gloriosa and later obtained by Sci-twi and Sunset shimmer.

9410437
I was thinking straight after we get back from Camp Everfree would work a little better, as otherwise we would need to do a massive re-write.

9410642
Hey, at this point Babs doesn't know that the Aj she's talking to and the Guard at Bronycon are the same person.

9410684
I totally agree with that. maybe explain later in the story to babs about the camp everfree trip and how aj now has super strength due to her geode/pendant she got at the camp.

9411663
But this means that Babs has arrived just as AB and AJ are being punished.

9411844
being punished for what?

9412038
If you look back in Canterlot Adventures, Apple Bloom, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle were not permitted to go to Camp Everfree, so their siblings smuggled them aboard.

9411844
I think Babs should arrive shortly after the Camp Everfree trip, as seen in this story. then of course, after the explanation that the cmc were punished for sneaking aboard the bus (with the help of Rarity, AJ, and Rainbow Dash, who were also punished as they aided the younger girls).
Plus the girls' tales of the summer vacation to Babs (encountering Gaea Everfree, seeing their older siblings/sibling figure pony up with new Crystal Guardian forms, etc), would make for an interesting conversation.

9412335
I'm with kwr2k13 on this one it does seem it would make a better story.

So... Those stories are mainly adult male bronies transforming in young teenage girls?

9414208
In some cases, but most of the time it's just done to have fun writing a story.

Welcome to the group, Heartfire Firebrand writer of Tempest Shadow at your service

9416151
Thanks I'm glad to be here, so what do you think how did I do with the first chapter.

9416339
I liked it, it was a good read. Probably better than I can do, also a bit of advice if you haven't read everyone else's stories I believe you should do so.

9416352
Oh ya Bloom and AJ said the thing to me a while back long before I put this story to paper. But I can't take all the credit for this chapter Bloom did a heavy edit on the original and I'm extremely greatful for his help.

9416362
Yeah I am glad to be part of this group, you know what screw it, welcome to the family.

9416366
I'm glad to be here Tempest and thanks for the warm welcome.

9414208
Mostly so far. We've had a few tfs that aren't gender changes, such as Scootaloo.

9416381
Tempest shadow teaches the girls' physical education classes and health and wellness/nutrition classes/electives. Part of the PE grade has the classes on wellness/nutrition health and the other is the sports/gym/shower participation.

9414208
For the most part, yes. There's exceptions, like Scootaloo's story and Tempest shadow's.

OC's and canon mlp characters welcome (all the main cast is taken).

9425960
So does that mean we'll be continuing the story as of now or are we still on hiatus?

9425975
We will be continuing the story as apple bloom and aj can tell Babs about the summer camp and how they helped stop Gaea Everfree/Gloriosa Daisy, as well as raise funds to save the camp from Mr. Rich by holding a charity event with the Rainbooms band playing at the Crystal Caverns venue.

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