Mail to Tartarus

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A slow day at work leads derpy to take up an unexpected route. The delivery itself takes her to the prisons of Tartarus, but a jobs a job.

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IDontWatchMLP

IDontWatchMLP #1 · Jan 15th, 2019 · 4 · ·

Neither snow, nor rain, nor hellfire, nor nightmare of the night, stays these ponies from the swift completion of their appointed rounds.

derpydeathruner

derpydeathruner #2 · Jan 15th, 2019 · · ·

not bad

Devela

Devela #3 · Jan 15th, 2019 · · ·

Enjoyed reading it, I simply ask would you like an editor to help spruce it up a little and read better?

SIGAWESOME

SIGAWESOME #4 · Jan 23rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

Strange to think someone would write to such a dark figure

Now I am imagining ~~Celestia~~ Trollestia sending Tirek travel and outdoorsy type magazines; the kind with full-spread colour photos of exotic locales and luxurious accommodations...
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Andy Ray

Andy Ray #5 · Mar 4th, 2019 · · ·

One such pony flew overhead, humming a tune to herself and missing the house she had to deliver too.

Didn't you mean "to"?

Andy Ray

Andy Ray #6 · Mar 4th, 2019 · · ·

Today was a rather slow day at the work, mail being much less chaotic then the holiday that had just went by.

Unbelievable! . "Then" should have been "than", and "went" ??! One doesn't simply mix the simple and the perfect tenses ! The holiday either "went" or "had gone" !