This story is a sequel to Blood in the sand
It started as a normal picnic. A picnic that becomes a journey in Space, where nopony has ever gone before.
Can they find a way home?
Anther un-canon sequel to Blood in the Sand.
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Bronycommander
A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"
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I approve! Good work so far.
9474173
Glad to hear you liked it
9474191
Of course!
*BEEP* resistance is futile.
Good job so far, although tbh I have no idea where the plot is going.
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You will See
How the fuck did you just go from WWII to Star Trek :v
9534968
I am also a Star Trek fan and i had the idea for a while, so i thought Why not giving it a try.
75 years... it could be worse.
9643385
Yeah, Good Thing it Never came so far in the tv Show.
I feel that parts in your story such as this could use some more description - this is a bit bland, to be honest. Go into depth about what they're feeling - use J.K. Rowling's method, for example. She used metaphors and juxtapositions to describe the specific feelings or surroundings that were used in her stories.
Other than that, not bad. On a less serious note, where are the redshirts? 🙃
9791289
well, given it is a short non-canon story, it's more focused on the ponies than the star trek characters. Plus, I can't remember Voyager had many redshirts
9791293
Ah, that's right. That was the Enterprise, wasn't it?
9791306
Yes
Although I have not seen much Star Trek, I could read the story without any problem and enjoy it and the selected music quite good for its respected scenes, and the case of Gunther gave me to think of how James / Jessie died, old or for other way (curious thing in which I heard the soundtrack of the BFV you chose for "a black sun rise" there was a comment from a user with the name "james gunther" equal and was telling me at that time "what a coincidence"
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9795480
Yes, that User was me and glad you like it
And a good ending. I'm not very invested in any of the Voyager-related Star Treks, but I'll take your word for it all on detail. Can't be as bad as those 60's special effect, eh?
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Glad you enjoyed it. And what you think about chapter 5?