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May I have a candy?

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Bon Bon just wanted to make some candy. Now she's spending the day guarding it against Lyra. This day couldn't get any worse.

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Real_Atomsk

Real_Atomsk #1 · Feb 1st, 2019 · · ·

It was a nice read but there are inconsistencies with capitalizing names. I would read more candy horse stories

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OpenPage #2 · Feb 1st, 2019 · · ·

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You will definitely see some inconsistencies. I can have a hard time with writing and editing, and my editor didn’t get to this one much. Sad part of having real lives in the way.

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