This story is a sequel to Sweetie's Mansion
It's been four months since sweetie stopped specter, saved her sister and friends, and been through some therapy. Continuing to fight the ghost fight even when they were all gone, rarity decided to bring Sweetie Belle on vacation. After arriving she finds that she has been framed for a crime she wasn't even there to commit. Now sweetie will have to travel around Island El Delfino to collect the shine sprites and clear her name. But what's with the metal look-alike she keeps seeing?
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Note : non-canon sequel to a book thats not mine, Just a fan and wanted a Super Mario Sunshine sequel so here you go!
Chapters (1)
Well in my Mario crossovers, Scootaloo is Mario while Sweetie is Luigi. Well I only really made one. Plus I think I only did that because I was in a Scootabelle mood at the time. Where was I going with this? Oh right, good luck with the story, even I more of a Sonic fan than Mario. Sunshine is evil... you need all the luck you can get. Blue coins, blue coins 224.
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Thank you random sir/madam, I hope for this story to be even a hundredth of the way as good as the story I'm inspired from. If you continue you reading can you help by leaving comments on what you enjoy or dislike? it would be a big help to the process.
7655191 Madam?!
There's a Mister in my name 
I can read the first chapter, but I'm leaving after the first week of next month ends. I rather not go into it on your story, plus I already wrote a story where The CMC play this game from the devil. (Cough, shameless plug, cough)
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Sorry, gotta be careful now-a-days, also nice plug. and its fine if you don't read I'm just happy to not have negativity in the comments.
It's Sweetie Belle or Sweetie. Because it is a name you got to remember to use your capital letters
Rarity and I think "Yeah sounds fun" she muttered with a eye roll.
Just when Rarity entered the dining room, Sweetie blah, blah, blah the rest is alright.
Remember the enter button is your friend. Also try to use [ hr ] just without the spaces it draws a line so it much cleaner. Like this.
Enter button and it's I'm.
Enter button!
For thoughts I use the italics button. [ i ] [/ i] e.g. So now I just have to learn how to aim Sweetie groaned at the thought.
It's Twilight's cutie mark or Cutie Mark which ever one you feel like using.
Capital F
Isn't Fludd not Fluff.
I think that's all of it. Try going to the editor group it seems like you need one. Don't worry I'm one of the ones that can't spell I just know when and where to put capitals letters, it's the bigger words that get me. I hope this helps
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Huge thanks man, you are definitely a hero. I have a pair of editor's that sadly didn't get to look over this book. I will totally still look into that editor group for help. I have also finished editing what you brought up as best as I could.
7655325 No problem, I'm just happy to help a fellow writer
I'm sure you'll do the same.
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uh, ya totally man >.>