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KriegsKorps4Death


"I ask you, what is the price of a mile? I tell you, it doesn't matter. For we seek redemption, no prize is too small. Only in death, only in sacrifice can we find atonement. This, is our litany."

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Luna finds a weird old box in the castle and decides to ask her sister about it. Celestia just wants to enjoy her precious moment of free-time. Well, too bad for her. Even worse, the box and it's content is about the rise of Nightmare Moon and the Equestrian Civil War between the two alicorn sisters. Obviously that Celestia will have to postpone her break for a little bit, right after she deals with a rather akward talk with her sister.

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This is my first fanfic ever, just a small stupid story. Cover art is made by me :twilightblush:
Feedback and constructive criticism is always and definitly appreciated, as well as mistake corrections :twilightsmile:
thanks everypony!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Hide a game that has your sister as a playable hero unit, do nothing about a national holiday that features your sister as a cannibal with a sweet tooth.
Perfect, solid and all round airtight plan.
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As for Luna, she is off to buy some premium Lunar Wolves squads.


Congratulations on your first story my friend!

As for cover art, check those out
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Or this one :pinkiecrazy:
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Weeeell, board games are easier to hide than a holiday :twilightsheepish: just leave it to celestia to be basically paranoid (because reasons that will come up later) :trollestia:

Thanks for the feedback :twilightsmile: As for the Cover art
I don‘t think it would really fit to it. The Game is more like Axis & Allies (and other strategy board games) so it would be a bit misleading

ALTHOUGH tabletop ala 40k would probably be the next for her step after this story :pinkiecrazy: in the name of Chaos and Darkness

the beginning of gamer luna the best luna

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I thought Axis & Allies was a video game series.

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There is a video game series named like that, the story however is based on a actual board game with the same title

A pleasant and welcome read. Of course there'd be a wargame dedicated to the largest equestrian conflict in the setting.
Liked and faved, eagerly awaiting the next round. :twilightsmile:

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Well good that you liked it :pinkiehappy:
And considering how great conflicts from our world are remembered and “processed“ (for the lack of a better term) I think it would make sense :twilightsheepish:

That was an great read!~ Will there more stories in this setting?

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Thank you :pinkiesmile:
I do have some ideas for more one-shots, but I don‘t anything planned at the moment

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