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Doctor Umbrae


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Seven Ponies, Seven Days, Seven Riddles. Discord unable to satiate his boredom, starts a game of Hell, and he has a certain six ponies in mind. However, who is this grey pegasus the mane six find in this new world?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

the only flaw it it is a VERY long chapter if it was shorter it would be perfect other than the length of the first chapter it's awesome!!!

Seems relle interesting so far! I'm excited to see where this goes. :pinkiehappy:

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The size of it was actually good for me. I love a long reading. Keeps me interested. Content was great. I just love "Discord revenge" fics. I started one but its on hiatus for now. Cant wait for day 1

Allow me to quote a song :yay:"The way I feel about you-oooh! And there ain't no doubt about it, I'm in love!" Gimme more:flutterrage:

Oh DANG! this is a long chapter! :pinkiegasp:

I guess I'll have to come back later to finish...

You have a good idea: Seven ponies, seven days, seven hells to go through.

And you've got personalities down.

But the OC confuses me. He needs to demonstrate some talent or flaw that balances the other six... and he hasn't shown that yet.

Keep up the writing!

That was AWESOME!

One thing that i can say: MORE!

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Yup! Agreed. And you started a Discord Revenge? I'm checking that out.

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