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Why I love the Sparkled Sea

Twilight Sparkle the future Ruler of Equestria,and is Terrible at making friends!!!,perhaps a certain Cyan Seapony can help with the Problem

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Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #1 · Sep 15th, 2018 · · 1 ·

Oy this needs an editor badly. I can't even finish it it's so bad. Even though I love the idea.

MoonSkies

MoonSkies #2 · Sep 15th, 2018 · · 1 ·

You need to improve alot :/

twi_is_pretty_cool

twi_is_pretty_cool #3 · Sep 15th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Minus the grammar being bad, it was a pretty interesting idea!

K-O-D-E-X

K-O-D-E-X #4 · Sep 21st, 2018 · 1 · ·

Well anything that was needed to be said was said already though I also recommend you use the author's notes section to put any comments or things you thought of at the end not mid story kinda breaks the immersion.

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