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EclipseFairy


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You have the dedication to the story down, but you badly need an editor. There are too many grammatical errors in this to leave it readable.

They both seem... *awfully* casual and accepting of the fact that Fizzy, at least, feels she was forced to tuck Whining Armor on penalty of probably death of she refused or fought back. Cadence is talking about punishing him like all he did wrong was not clear his little dalliance with her first.

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WEll We could have gone another way with it and had her murder him on sight for that

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